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On Writing

Critique: What do you write? Where has your work appeared?
Maney: The French poet Paul Valery said that a poem is never finished, but abandoned, and with this in mind I’m trying to reach the right moment of abandonment with a novel I’ve been working on for years. It’s called Killing Time and focuses on a woman in her thirties—a failed academic—who becomes an antiques dealer, has an affair with a sleazy auctioneer, and is subsequently framed for his murder. Coincidentally, I’m an academic and an antiques dealer, but the similarities end there. I am especially interested in the world of fakes, which I suppose is not remarkable considering I’m a fiction writer. But I’ve known a few fakers and makers of “antiques” whose work has fooled many, including themselves. One such faker told me that what he makes is “as good as the real thing” if no one can detect its true age. He really believes that what he builds from scratch is an antique, and he goes to amazing lengths to achieve this illusion. I love and fear such people, because they present such rich dramatic possibilities. They are what Killing Time is made of.
       My fiction has appeared in many magazines, including Troika, Western Humanites Review, American Fiction, Quarterly West, Confrontation, and The Bridge. I’ve had articles in the AWP Chronicle and other academic journals, and I’ve helped edit several anthologies of fiction, including Sudden Fiction, Sudden Fiction International, The Best of the West, and most recently with Tom Hazuka, A Celestial Omnibus: Short Fiction on Faith.

Critique: Where can readers obtain your books?
Maney: Sudden Fiction and Sudden Fiction International have become standard textbooks for creative writing classes and can be purchased nearly anywhere. A Celestial Omnibus: Short Fiction on Faith is also selling well and can be found in most well-stocked bookstores. Amazon.com carries everything, of course, but I would suggest buying from bookstores if possible just to give the smaller, independent retailers a boost. Some of the nicest and most intelligent people I know have worked in places like Prairie Lights in Iowa City and The King’s English in Salt Lake City, where you can order everything I’ve ever worked on.

Critique: Do you have a website?
Maney: I’m a Luddite at heart. It was not too long ago that I stopped using fountain pens to write stories with, and I abandoned them only because they kept leaking in my shirts and it was getting expensive. The poet Larry Levis, who I knew at the University of Utah, used to write only with vintage fountain pens, and I sold him several of mine. He was a really sweet guy, and a wonderful writer. He used to carefully examine the pens I brought him, hold them in his hand to check their balance, and then gently apply the gold nib to a piece of paper, writing any words that happened to come out. He would buy the pen or refuse it, depending on whether there were “poems inside.” So no, I don’t have a website. But if having one would make me a better writer, then sign me up.

Critique: What are some of your other interests?
Maney: I’ve always been interested in just about everything that no one else cared about. Talk about lonely. When I was a kid I loved to listen to old people, because they had lost the fear of being boring. And since everyone’s favorite subject is themselves, I heard great stories from grandparents, elderly strangers of all kinds, mentally retarded people, and other outcasts. The source of so much writing is loneliness, I think—the desire to connect to others, to the self , to make sense of so many years and experiences, to make the self less strange and uncomfortable in the world. So I guess you could say that listening and being listened to are my main interests. Combine this with nosiness and a passion for trying to understand all points of view, and you can imagine what kind of kid I was: someone who hid behind doors to hear his parents argue, who loved being anonymous, who thought he was invisible. Secrets were my food. Clubs and organizations that require participation always freaked me out. I love history, old letters, old houses, old photographs, and old cars. I collect antique clocks and watches. For me, they are time machines whose fuel is the imagination.

Critique: Do you write full-time?
Maney: In a sense, yes, because whenever I'm not writing, I’m thinking about writing. It’s not the same, of course. How many times have I written something in my head and failed to write it down? This can be a real problem. It’s like telling a story you’re working on to a friend, and in doing so, the tension that created the story is released. It’s like blowing up a big balloon: once you let it go and it flies crazily through the air, there’s not much left. Nobody’s interested in a flaccid balloon. It’s better to let it go on paper, where it can fly again and keep flying.

Critique: What do you read for pleasure?
Maney: Everything. I can’t control myself. I become desperate if there’s nothing to read. I have great sympathy for people who read cereal boxes and milk cartons. This is why grafitti exists. If there was good reading material in restrooms across the United States, there would be no grafitti to speak of. Words fill the vacuum. Words fill the God-sized hole. You know you’re in a good place if when you use a stranger’s bathroom you find it filled with books, newspapers, and magazines. I know some people for whom the bathroom is also the library. Don’t ask what the connection is. But if you write, chances are that you will be an omniverous reader of poetry, fiction, and a lot of non-fiction. People who are afraid that reading other writers’ work will somehow pollute or take over their own writing are just talking to themselves, and their writing will show it. For me, all good writing gives pleasure. As a writer of fiction, I believe that reading poetry has strengthened my understanding of what language can accomplish. I wish that poets felt the same about reading fiction, but most I’ve known don’t.

Critique: Who are your biggest influences? Which authors do you avoid?
Maney: There are so many wonderful writers, far too many to mention. When I was a kid, I loved Bernard Malamud, Flannery O’Connor, and John Cheever. I loved the Russians: Turgenev, Tolstoy, Babel, and Chekhov. Especially Chekhov. I loved Joyce’s Dubliners (I memorized the last paragraphs of “Araby” and “The Dead”). I read everything by Tillie Olsen, Grace Paley, Isaac Bashevis Singer, and J.P. Donleavy. Ralph Ellison and Malcolm X blew me away. So did Melville. Guy de Maupassant, D.H. Lawrence, Somerset Maugham, Graham Greene, and Alberto Moravia filled the gaps. God, was I happy. These were such happy years that I almost didn’t realize that I was a dopey, blue-collar, useless, dreamy kid who had no money and no real prospects. At the University of Iowa in the late 70s I discovered Ray Carver, James Baldwin, and Richard Yates. A few years later I met Richard Ford and thought Rock Springs was one of the best collections of stories I’d ever read. I bought James Salter’s A Sport and a Past-time in a used book store and then read everything of his. I was like a maggot out to devour all of literature. I read Hemingway, Faulkner, Fitzgerald, Porter, and Steinbeck. I read Hesse, Mann, Kafka, and Calvino. I thought Nathaniel West’s Miss Lonelyhearts and Day of the Locust were a hoot. I plowed through Virginia Woolf. I gobbled up anthologies of all kinds. I read Vonnegut, Borges, Nabokov, and Solzhenitsyn. What a feast!
       The writers I read now are Allan Gurganus, Ian Jack, John Updike, Andre Dubus, Anne Lamott, and anyone else who makes my heart beat faster and puts my mind in a dangerous and exciting place.
       I avoid the phonies: the narcissists, the humorless, leaden, ham-handed careerists, and all others who kill joy.

Critique: What drove you to writing?
Maney: It seemed to me that the conversation begun by the writers above was so vital that I wanted to join in. I wanted to do my part. I liked editing anthologies, writing stories, and buying books. I liked the way writing focused my mind and my life. I enjoyed the warmth of the banquet hall and the crumbs that dropped from the table. I wanted somehow to avoid missing the “feast of life” (Joyce, “A Painful Case”). I liked the party. I knew I would never work for a corporation or be a member of a moneyed club. I felt much more comfortable around outcasts and misfits and jaded observers. Writing creates a daily opportunity for the discovery of some small particle of truth that will, I hope, add up to something. If life is just a dream, then I plan to make it a good one, because working for others has been mostly a nightmare.

Critique: What person in your academic career was most important in the development of your prose?
Maney: In many ways, the writers I’ve mentioned have been my teachers. I remember when I was a student at the University of Iowa Writers’ Workshop, I asked Vance Bourjaily what I should do to learn how to write. What he said was so obvious and plain that it struck me as disappointing. He told me to read. Read everything, he said. The good, the bad, the middling. Then think about who I liked best, and write for that writer. Vance was no fool, but I was there when his former students sent him their novels to read, and he fed them to the fire in the big fireplace in his converted schoolhouse on the hill. “Dolce far Niente” was the carved inscription on the stone mantlepiece: “Sweet it is to do nothing.” So I guess I’ve had many teachers in the writers I admired, but I expect nothing from them. I asked Richard Ford once what he thought of a teacher who claimed that characters in fiction should not be thought of as human beings, but as theoretical functions. This, by the way, was a teacher who had been deeply influenced by French critical theory. “That’s a fool talking,” said Ford. And I watched James Salter take a character of mine out of a story, stand up, and imitate a Russian accent. Salter became this character and acted out the dialogue. This was to show me where I’d missed some good dramatic opportunities. And I saw Helen Yglesias teach with genuine kindness in workshop after workshop. She was someone who convinced me that compassion has its own intelligence.

Critique: If you could change one thing about your past in writing, what would it be?
Maney: I would not waste time at schools where books are “texts” and writers are irrelevant and talking about one’s characters as people is called “baby criticism.”

Critique: What compelled you to submit your work for the first time?
Maney: Most if not all writers reach a point where they’re curious about their chances. Sometimes it’s a teacher who makes the recommendation. Sometimes it’s a friend. With me, I waited until I thought I was ready to face the long onslaught of rejections. I waited until the time when I thought a story was good enough for me to dismiss the first, second, and third rejection and still have the faith to send it out again. Or the will to revise. That’s how it was the first time, and that’s how it still is. The first time I sent out a story was in 1981; my first publication was in 1989.

Critique: How do you handle rejection?
Maney: It used to be that really good editors commented on rejected stories. Now very few will, or can, take the time to write anything critical. So if you want useful, critical commentary, join a workshop. Unless you’ve been an editor, you have no idea how many manuscripts come into a magazine every day, and how few good readers there are to handle such a volume. Most of the “little” magazines are edited by students or writers who are very pressed for time. Hardly anybody gets paid. So if I get a form rejection from an editor, I don’t take it personally. Written comments from editors are a kind of gold coin. Even negative comments are good. If someone is taking the time to write anything to you, then you should continue sending work to that editor. All attention is good, whether the comments are positive or negative. The first story I sent to The New Yorker was terrible, and the editor, Linda Asher, wrote back to say that the manuscript was cleanly typed and had nice margins. That’s pretty much the pits, but I used it to build up to some really helpful rejection letters from her later on. Unfortunately, Linda left the job or I’d be sending her work today. She was a great reader.

Critique: What has been your proudest moment in publishing?
Maney: Getting anything published is always a great feeling. It does validate all the effort. I’m pleased to see the galleys for an article, story, or poem. But probably the most wonderful moment of all is when you get the call from someone who says that he or she wants to publish your book. The closest I’ve come is when Susan Wurst at Beacon Press in Boston called to say that the senior editors had agreed to move on a proposal Tom Hazuka and I had submitted for an anthology. The pay seemed substantial and we were thrilled to be given the chance to put out an anthology of fiction with our names on the cover. Tom and I had worked together in the past, but we were only associate or assistant editors. This time the book was ours. The second best moment is when you receive the book itself and can see for the first time what all the work looks like. For me, this was a very good moment, because I didn’t see anything that displeased me.

Critique: What do you do when you can’t write another word?
Maney: All writers have to deal with this. It’s as simple as this: writing happens when you sit in a chair and start typing. Gibberish is fine so long as you keep the irrigation ditches open. Sooner or later it rains. I believe in forcing myself to sit down and type whether I’m tired, hungry, despondent, or out of my head. Something always comes out, even if it’s pure crap. Then something better comes along, sooner or later (sometimes days or weeks later), but the fingers and mind are being exercised, and that’s important. I certainly do know that if I stop writing, it takes a long and often fruitless time before anything good comes out again. So if I can shorten the wait by going through the motions, then that’s obviously better. Writing is work—often very hard work, and there’s no way around it. Whenever you hear of someone who sits down and writes a whole story that’s good the first time, then it’s either a lie, or the writer thought about that story for a long time and wrote it in his or her head before committing it to paper. Or it may be that the person wrote every day, keeping the irrigation ditches of their imaginations open, and it rained a torrent. I find that reading high-quality work can also stimulate the imagination—so long as I continue to sit down and write.

Critique: How do you get and record ideas?
Maney: Everyone knows: write it down. Whatever occurs to you as being interesting—dreams, random bits of juicy overheard conversation, dialogue that you write in your head, a nice description—all should be written down immediately. Like dreams, conversation fades quickly. I always keep a pad of paper around. I used to carry a notebook, but the little ones always fall apart quickly. While driving I’ll sometimes get an idea and write it down on my hand. A small pad of paper can be attached to the dashboard, but I’ve actually had it fall off and get in the way of the accelerator and brake pedals. So when I don’t want to forget something, I pull over to save at least three important things: my life, the lives of others on the road, and the life of that good idea.

Critique: What have been your best/worst experiences in publishing?
Maney: The best experiences have to do with getting published: working with smart editors, participating in the community of writers, being part of the world of art and ideas. That said, sometimes the worst experiences also have to do with being published. Sometimes editors sit on manuscripts and take a long time to produce their magazines. Sometimes screwy mistakes are made by the printer. Occasionally someone will congratulate you on having a story accepted, and that’s the last you hear from that person or magazine. This has happened to me twice. But probably the most frustrating experience I’ve had is when I’ve sent work to magazines, never to hear from them again. Nothing, despite the S.A.S.E. The worst way to treat any writer is to pretend he or she doesn’t exist, and whether this is a so-called “friend” who never comments on a story you’ve shared, or a magazine that doesn’t bother to return your manusript with a rejection slip, the result is painful and frustrating. Obviously, if your follow-up note after a reasonable amount of time (six months to a year) fails to get an explanation, then don’t send that magazine anything again. I’ve had the silent treatment a few times from e-text and hard text magazines. The good news is that even if you circulate your work a lot, this will happen only rarely. And if it does, it won’t matter because there are other magazines where your stories still have a chance.

Critique: What do you think of e-publishing? Where is it headed? What, if anything, can be changed or improved?
Maney:
E-publishing offers a number of advantages to both writers and editors. First, it avoids the hassles and expenses of commercial printers and the postal service, where costs are high and rising. Second, an editor with computer training can format the entire magazine and see it whole. E-mailing galley proofs to contributors is also simple and fast. Financing web space has to be cheaper than producing, publishing, and distributing a hard-text magazine. There is, however, some prejudice against e-publishing, and this usually comes from people who complain that they want something to hold in their hands and put on the shelf. Of course, e-magazines can be downloaded and printed, but these people hold that this isn’t the same thing. They want a bound magazine.
       To me, as a writer, e-publishing is much more convenient than traditional publishing. I save money, because I don’t have to deal with postage or an SASE. Editors often respond much more quickly than do their counterparts at traditional magazines. Lastly, correcting galleys is much more convenient. I think that the more authors submit their work to e-magazines, the more obvious it will be to everyone that this is a wonderful way to publish. Even to Luddites like me.   

J.P. Maney

J.P. MANEY has published in Troika, Confrontation, Green Mountains Review, American Fiction, Quarterly West, Apalachee Review, The Bridge, and many other magazines. He has co-edited four anthologies of fiction, including Best of the West and A Celestial Omnibus: Short Fiction on Faith, now in its fourth edition. Mr. Maney is a graduate of the Iowa Writers' Workshop and holds a Ph.D. in English. He is currently working on Killing Time, a novel about the antiques trade, the making of fakes, and murder. Mr. Maney's short story "Western Exposures" was recently selected for inclusion in the e2ink Anthology.