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On Writing

Marudhan: Mr. Hoffman, you are in Japan for nearly two decades now, from where you are contributing essays, book reviews and translations to various Japanese and Western magazines. In Japan, a land of curious contradictions and oriental beauty, you must have witnessed differences in lifestyle, culture and values, when compared to the western way of living.  How do you think has this "shift" influenced you and your works?  Do you believe that a writer's environment influences his thoughts and hence his works?

Hoffman: Being in Japan kept me from taking my environment for granted. Relocating to a whole new environment was like learning to see all over again, just as I had to learn to speak all over again. It was a bit like a return to infancy at 27. Few of my stories have Japanese settings, but learning how to see in a new way definitely influenced the settings they do have. And most of those settings are not quite real—at least not in the sense that a photograph is real. There is an element of fantasy in them—may be something like what Dostoyevsky called “fantastic realism”.

Marudhan: How do you select your materials? Are they real-life portraits or purely imaginary?

Hoffman: Neither and both. Actually I sometimes think that all my characters are me in some form or other, narcissist that I am. In The Empty Café the only character I can think of offhand who is a fairly straight portrait of a real-life model is Grace in “Solitude.”

Marudhan: Will you concur with the generally held view that a writer has a responsibility to educate and enlighten people and not merely entertain them?  Should a work carry a message, always?

Hoffman: I don’t think a writer has a responsibility to do anything except write according to his or her lights. The best writers are enlightening—not because of any self-consciously assumed responsibility, but naturally so. Lesser writers don’t have that in them, and it’s no use telling them it’s their responsibility to be enlightening—they can’t give what they don’t have. On the other hand, I do hate to see literature stooping to the level of television entertainment. A message? I don’t want a writer’s message, I want a writer’s life. I want a writer I read to put his / her life into their work. I don’t want them to tell me how to live—I want them to show me how they live.

Marudhan: Mr. Hoffman, since you are also a book reviewer, can you identify some factors that good books have in common?

Hoffman: I don’t review much fiction. Mostly I review academic books on Japan, rather dry tomes, most of them filled with interesting knowledge tediously presented because few scholars these days seems to have mastered the art and craft of writing. I love good writing, and I abhor bad. A book can contain all kinds of interesting information—if it’s poorly written, I won’t read it (or at least I’ll give it a bad review). On the other hand, I’ll read anything with pleasure whose writing lives and breathes, whether I’m interested in the subject to begin with or not. I’ve always thought that good writing is linked to good understanding. To write poorly is not merely to lack a skill but to be deficient in understanding.

Marudhan: In this age of globalisation, it is at times, difficult to ascertain whether a work has been produced to appeal a particular region-specific audience or a global readership?  How do you handle this?  Do you have a particular audience in your mind when you work on a book?

Hoffman: No audience in mind. The only audience I have in mind as I write is me. If other people like it, of course that’s very gratifying.

Marudhan: What would be your advice / recommendations to evolving writers?

Hoffman: Number one : Read. That can’t be stressed too much. Keep a notebook and pen handy and scribble your stray thoughts down as they occur, because the most fruitful thoughts soon vanish. Spend at least a small part of every day alone. And then, of course—write. You have to maintain simultaneously two contradictory attitudes: 1) that you’re amazingly good, because otherwise you won’t persist, and 2) that you’re nowhere near good enough, because otherwise you won’t improve. Ignore the rejection slips. Learn what you can from well-meant advice, but write YOUR way, not the way the agents and editors and creative writing proofs tell you to write. You may not be the greatest writer on earth—you’re probably not—but no one on earth can write YOUR stories better than you can.

Marudhan: Whose works do you like the most in fiction and nonfiction?

Hoffman: There are four writers I discovered very young and who I keep going back to : Dostoyevsky, Isaac Bashevis Singer, Flannery O’Connor and Kafka. These are writers who took our common reality and made of it something profoundly individual. I read a lot, but I’m not really very well-read; there are lots of gaps in my literary education. I’m not too fond of much contemporary writing. Too many tricks, too much phony individualism and false passion, as if written to gain the attention of indifferent people in a busy world. Hard to blame them, I suppose. The word is busy and indifferent. Nonfiction? Mostly philosophy and history. I’m totally illiterate in technology and economics. Sometimes I think I should read up on them, but I never get very far.

Marudhan: How do you foresee the growth of literature in the times to come?  How much deeper would its impact be in our lives?

Hoffman: I think literature as we know it is dying. In 200 years the book will be an artifact. Even now, with more literate people in the world than ever before, both percentage-wise and in absolute terms, we’re not really readers any more. We’re scanners. There are just too many competing interests and amusements for serious reading to flourish. Sitting alone quietly with a book—I’m afraid that delightful image is fast on the way to becoming an anachronism.

Marudhan: Information is now the key-word.   We have numberless sources today from where information keeps pouring in, tremendously.  Take the Internet, for instance.  We are also witnessing numerous e-zines sprouting on the web, taking up new roles in publishing.  How will you rate this development?

Hoffman: It’s information glut—far more than we can absorb. More than I can absorb, anyway. I’m sure many other people have higher absorptive capacities than I have. But I think too much is as big a problem as too little, with information as with food. We’re not THINKING about the information we’re exposed to. Info-glut is robbing us of our depths. As for the e-zines and the internet’s new role in publishing—this may be a contradiction, but I’m all for them. After all, they’ve made my own publishing career possible.

Marudhan: How effectively can a writer help society by way of writing?

Hoffman: Anything good helps society. Good writing may be the only thing that can keep the book alive, and that alone would be an enormous service. Writing is one of the few communication media conducive to genuine depth, as opposed to in-one-ear-out-the-other television and most movies, for example. A writer can most effectively help society by writing on a serious level, keeping the standards high and making it think.   

Michael Hoffman

MICHAEL HOFFMAN was born in Montreal, Canada, and has lived in Japan since 1982. His short fiction has appeared in various North American and Japanese magazines. He is the author of The Empty Café and One-Armed Yatsu & Other Stories, available through 1stbooks. As a freelance journalist he is a regular contributor of essays, book reviews and translations to Japan's English-language media. He is co-author of the bestselling collection of tall tales Tokyo Confidential (The East Publications, Tokyo).